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Kleopetra Weaves's avatar

My female lead is certain to take the plunge this week ... an irreversible, life-altering step into the unknown.

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Raquel's avatar

Taking the time to answer this question was very helpful! I had a sense of it, but putting it into words and reading it made it easier to visualise how to present it to the reader.

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W Howl's avatar

This area of the work is so intense and hard to get through! Thank you for putting these out!

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Kailey Brennan DelloRusso's avatar

I'm so glad they are helpful! Yes, these first few drafts can evoke so many different emotions haha

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W Howl's avatar

Genuine anxiety! Is that just me? Haha! It’s intense, but I I can feel it coming to be, and these are well timed . Everyone I’ve read I’m like yes! This is where I am!

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A City With A View's avatar

This is really putting everything into perspective. It is making me rethink some scenes I have coming up and that's a great thing! Love something that can trigger a fruitful brainstorm

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Kailey Brennan DelloRusso's avatar

A fruitful brainstrom! I love it

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Pat Sherblom's avatar

This bit is helpful. My protagonist accepted the challenge, but I need to have her think out loud about why.

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Toni Oreck's avatar

A disembodied voice that tells her she’s like a tree dying from the inside out. She doesn’t want to die. So she questions her choices up to that point and chooses something everyone around her thinks is nuts.

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